Deep red evening sun
Darkness veils your slow decent,
Night falls over us.
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April 21, 2008 at 6:41 am
what a reallity, very true.
May 6, 2008 at 8:21 am
where is this evening sun?
how about adding a photo or drawing to go with your haiku
what is a haiku would be quite nice to know
i know it’s a from of japanese poetry?
May 10, 2008 at 5:13 pm
[...] I hope to get back to writing soon, and am considering taking up Hoh’s challenge and drawing a setting sun for Evening [...]
May 11, 2008 at 6:16 pm
[...] Evening Sun (Illustration) Here’s the requested illustration for the haiku Evening Sun. [...]